tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post1622939546751225689..comments2023-09-17T04:49:08.190-06:00Comments on DAVID J. WEST: Trunk Talesnephite blood spartan hearthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17092519999184585295noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-88264800193746364982012-05-23T10:51:04.718-06:002012-05-23T10:51:04.718-06:00Thank you Charles, I appreciate that. Sometimes it...Thank you Charles, I appreciate that. Sometimes it takes awhile to come back to certain stories.nephite blood spartan hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17092519999184585295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-45340546086397225702012-05-23T09:16:21.388-06:002012-05-23T09:16:21.388-06:00Reads very well, man. Great set up. I've got...Reads very well, man. Great set up. I've got a lot of story fragments sitting around as well. I do on occasion finish them too, when the energy comes flowing from a new direction.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-49935184171290832082012-05-22T14:20:30.317-06:002012-05-22T14:20:30.317-06:00Thank you Keith, I was trying to give example of t...Thank you Keith, I was trying to give example of those unfinished tales-though it is my utmost wish to actually finish my stories rather than leave them hanging.nephite blood spartan hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17092519999184585295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-7010925269075877662012-05-22T14:02:37.116-06:002012-05-22T14:02:37.116-06:00You, sir, are a vile and evil man for posting this...You, sir, are a vile and evil man for posting this without an ending, leaving us hanging like that.<br /><br />I really like the voice and the way the protagonist reacts to the wonders he sees. You did a great job of not giving him modern understanding of things that are clear to the reader. Well done, and I'm looking forward to the ending.Adventuresfantastichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16907562789681407416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-56509545385517193472012-05-22T13:24:52.954-06:002012-05-22T13:24:52.954-06:00Much appreciated Chris.Much appreciated Chris.nephite blood spartan hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17092519999184585295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-73091593527458244092012-05-22T13:23:06.783-06:002012-05-22T13:23:06.783-06:00This is a great opening and definitely has potenti...This is a great opening and definitely has potential for a lot of fun. :)Okiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-77906083702675906862012-05-22T13:22:58.078-06:002012-05-22T13:22:58.078-06:00Thanks Daron, I plan on it someday-but this is onl...Thanks Daron, I plan on it someday-but this is only one of many that are calling.nephite blood spartan hearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17092519999184585295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3568342056330504573.post-50646300221217437282012-05-22T13:14:12.613-06:002012-05-22T13:14:12.613-06:00Excellent. You've gotta finish this one.Excellent. You've gotta finish this one.Daron D. Fraleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14753629830336214161noreply@blogger.com